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Sep 22, 2012, 7:39:10 AM
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what shouldve been by SBCheeseCake what shouldve been by SBCheeseCake
well long ago..when soul calibur 2 first came out.my cousin and i made an oc..kilika *i know stupid name.well she was supposed to be the daughter of xianghua and kilik.i was super disappointed when i found out leixia wasn't kiliks :(.i would write more about kilika right now..but my keyboard is being an ass.if i ever draw her again.i will write a bio for her.
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f1utterby3 Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely piece. I love the bright colors that you've used here, it really makes the piece pop and the yellows and reds go well with each other. I think the pose and expression on her also look very natural and suits this piece well!
My only suggestion would be that the lines are very thick. This can make it look clunky in areas. Also, you don't even really need them because the shading should speak for itself, and you've shown in this piece that you had a lot of control over both the shadows and the highlights/
Great work!
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SBCheeseCake Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you for the critique

ive been working on that and my lines no longer come out so clunky and thick.maybe i'll do this pic over ^_^
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f1utterby3 Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! It'd definitely be interesting to see a before and after piece, note me if you decide to do it, I'd love to check it out!
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SBCheeseCake Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok i definitely will!
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Astrikos Oct 5, 2012   General Artist
How cute. I lile the pose and her expression.

however, I think the shading should be a bit more defined. I also think that the outlining in her hair is slightly thick.

I think a thinner line would make the piece feel a bit more crisp.

The pose looks lovely. :la:

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SBCheeseCake Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you ^_^

and thanks for the critique!ill be sure to work on that stuff on my next piece!and ill try to make the lines thinner ^_^
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Astrikos Oct 6, 2012   General Artist
My pleasure. :hug:

And :la:
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SBCheeseCake Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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Astrikos Oct 9, 2012   General Artist
:D
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AsharaNi Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Well done! :)
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